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july 4 2011 kaitlyn o'quinn-scott

What does it mean to be human?

 To be human you have to learn how to deal with different problems within different people. Being human means being kind and respectful. Helping others and learning the ways of life. Being human also means being productive and finding the person inside. A human can not be a human without other people around. Being human can also come with some negative side to it. For example, some people are controlling or maybe are quiet and do not talk to many people. The government also has some positive and negative sides(Such as? and how does this relate to human nature?). Being a human is about feeling your emotions and finding the right people to be around. I don't think i would be me without all the special people in my life, and supporting me through everything.

Good content Kaitlyn. Try and find ways to combine short sentences into longer complex sentences. I really like your concluding sentence.

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